Idea for a superhero supervillain short story anthology

For some time now, I’ve had the desire to edit and publish an anthology of short stories written by others. I don’t want to do a general sci-fi or horror themed collection, though; I want to be much more particular - to create a mythology that has enough scope for a great variation of stories. I think it was Machine of Death that got my mind turning in this direction. I’ve been musing upon several ideas, and I want to share what I think is the strongest one with you.

Imagine an experimental prison facility where the inmates are required to undergo a surgical operation on their brains that accelerates their thought processes to ten times normal speed. However, the convicts feel completely normal inside their own heads, as if they are processing thoughts at normal speed. So, how would they perceive the world around them? In slow motion. Now, what’s the purpose of all this? To reduce the problem of prison overcrowding; to get convicts in and out of prison as quickly as possible and yet still give them appropriate punishment. And so, a ten-year prison sentence can be served in the space of one year; a twenty-year stretch in two. On completion of a sentence, each convict will be given a second operation on his brain, returning his thoughts to normal, before he is released back to society.

Since this is an experimental prison - the first of its kind - there are some unexpected side-effects. The convicts develop the ability to control the speed of their own thoughts; it’s like being able to slow down and speed up time itself by an act of the will. (I’m also toying with giving them the ability to astral project their souls out of their bodies, but the jury’s still out on that one.) The inmates keep this ability hidden from the prison authorities.

Then one day there is a mass prison break, and let’s say one hundred of these men (and women?) are now at large in society. Imagine all those thieves, rapists, murderers walking free, with a massive tactical advantage over anyone who would hunt them down. Imagine getting into a fist-fight and being able to see every blow coming in slow motion. Imagine seeing bullets tearing through the air towards you and being able to dodge (bearing in mind that the human body is still acting in realtime and you won’t be able to move at ten times the normal speed; what you will have, by all appearances, is lightning reflexes, but you certainly won’t be The Flash). Imagine being surrounded by a SWAT team and being able to slow time down a near standstill, allowing you to observe all of your enemies’ positions and plan your escape with careful patience.

Is this mythology strong enough to span fifteen to twenty original stories? Stories about these extraordinary evil men and the ordinary people whose job is to catch them (and any more diverse scenarios that other writers can think of). The idea originated in a piece of X-Files fan fiction that I wrote a decade ago, called Reflex - a story about Mulder and Scully on the trail of a bullet-dodging rapist (published in a small press zine called RQC). The idea was brought to the front of my mind again recently when playing the videogame F.E.A.R., where your character has the ability to slow time down for brief periods while engaging in combat. I’m also fascinated with the notion of bad guys being the only people with “super powers” (of course, there is scope for one of those stories about the innocent man wrongfully incarcerated); the good guys must use cunning and ingenuity, rather than an alternative super-power, to win the day (although I wouldn’t rule out the appearance of actual superheroes, if the story is good enough).

I’m not giving this project a definite green light just yet. This post is me putting the feelers out, to see what others think. Marketing-wise, I reckon the time is right for such an anthology, as superheroes are very much in vogue these days. But is my take on the genre worth pursuing? Comments and suggestions most welcome.

21 Responses to “Idea for a superhero supervillain short story anthology”

  1. PRAEst76 Says:

    Might be good considering, as you say, super-heroes are in. Have you seen the Tv show Heroes yet? It’s a very original modern update of the whole idea. Feels alot like a graphic novel. Watchmen and that ilk.

    Your idea seems good but I think looking for 20 stories in the vein seriously risks repetition. a general gritty modern “superhuman” anthology might be good. there were a couple of ideas I was working on there myself. Including one that is rather frustratingly close to one of the ideas they’ve used in Heroes.

  2. PRAEst76 Says:

    BTW i think that whole “bullet time” thing popped up in Max Payne first. Haven’t played F.E.A.R. myself. Looks interesting but I’m not sure this machine can manage it. Particularly since I’m running Linux and it means buggering about with windows emulation.

  3. Darryl Sloan Says:

    Yes, my fear is that I won’t get enough diversity of stories. But taking The Dead Zone TV series as an example (particularly seasons 1 & 2), I’ve been amazed by the amount of great writing that has gone into the episodes. And to think it’s all just an expansion of a single Stephen King novel about one man with a psychic ability.

    With this anthology, my hope is that I’ve given writers enough rope to take the story to all kinds of unexpected places. We’ll see, I guess.

    F.E.A.R. is well worth playing, if you can manage it. It’s my favourite FPS; great enemy AI and a spooky atmosphere.

  4. Darryl Sloan Says:

    Oh, and yeah, I’m enjoying Heroes a great deal.

  5. Andy Says:

    Surely that doesn’t make sense! If they have the ability to see the world in slo-mo, due to the medical procedure it would be a great advantage, like you say to see things happen at a greatly reduced rate. In order to counteract that advantage you would need to specify that the individual’s physical actions would match the speed to which they see the world around them, i.e. If they see a bullet coming towards them they would not be able to move out of it’s path due to relative speed in relation to how it would tavel under normal conditions.
    It all sounds a bit like crappy Hollywood summer blockbuster….
    I think the problem with coming up be a good superhero/villian story is that it’s been done to death and nothing seems very original even if you completely suspend your disbelief….

  6. Darryl Sloan Says:

    Yes, the villain would be constrained by normal physics. He would have to be getting out of the way while his enemy was aiming. So, bullet-dodging is probably a bit of an overstatement.

    It’s a pity the idea isn’t so original anymore, as I wrote that original story way back in 1996, pre Matrix, pre Max Payne.

  7. Mark Stevens Says:

    Be careful of opting for a theme that lends itself more to a visual medium than a literary one. Ie, the accelerated thought processes manifesting themselves as bullet time. You may not have meant to suggest a narrow focus for that idea, but the references to dodging bullets, evading SWAT teams and the comparisons with FEAR do suggest that’s what you primarily had in mind. (And writers reading a brief will take things very literally and you’d end up with about two dozen poor man’s Matrix rip-offs being submitted.)

  8. Darryl Sloan Says:

    I hear you, Mark. And I’m definitely not looking for Matrix rip-offs. It was probably a bad idea to draw attention to that side of things in the teaser, but combat was the most obvious angle that struck me.

    I want the emphasis to be on cunning and ingenuity. For instance, as a villain wanting to hack into a computer account, you could watch the user’s fingers typing the password in slow-mo. As a good guy trying to catch a bad guy, you might lure him to somewhere and use knock-out gas.

    The whole scenario, however, just might not be viable. What would give me a little more confidence is if readers could think up and submit a bunch of inventive ideas around the premise.

  9. James Maxon Says:

    Humm… I think you have a good idea there. My own brain kicked in and a few ideas brushed the surface. There’s room for a lot of creativity, assuming originality isn’t compromised. But I can see where there could be a problem between the mental time and physical time. How can a prisoner mentally sit on the crapper for 10 years, but their physical body only defecates a year’s worth? The numbers wouldn’t add up. Or am I missing something? I know, that’s a bad example, but I think it does point out the difficulty in coordinating the mental with the physical.

  10. Darryl Sloan Says:

    Hi, James.

    I’m not actually seeing the problem here. The slow-mo effect is all purely in the perception of the person affected. A ten-year prison stretches takes place in one year of real time. It only feels like ten years, because of how you perceive time.

    I’d be interested to hear your ideas privately.

  11. Andy Says:

    I don’t see how that would make an interesting story or stories. If it’s all about perception then the real world moves as normal but if you happening to be watching one of the criminals that’s had the procedure it would just look like they’re taking a long time to reply to something????
    I’m assuming the perception would need to be interlaced with long times in solitiry to allow the real progression of time????
    Something just isn’t adding up here. From what I gather this procedure is really just a jumping off point for any abilities the individuals gain after the fact therefore it doesn’t feature too heavly in the overall story. More of a prologue!
    Even after taking that into account I think unless you can come up with something different it’ll not work that well.
    How about the overall effect restricts the individual using the letter “E” i.e.
    ” I’v~ b~~n aff~ct~d by a proc~dur~ wh~n I s~rv~d tim~ in the local stat~ p~nat~ntary th~r~for~ I can’t b~ h~ld to account for my v~ry bad us~ of th~ ~nglish laugaug~”

  12. Darryl Sloan Says:

    Andy,

    You’re picking this up all wrong. If anything, if we were watching a criminal who had undergone the procedure, he would do everything as fast as he could, because he would be impatient with how sluggish the world appears to him. Walking would feel like trudging through mud, so he would run mostly. Talking requires too long, so he would talk faster than normal and also use shorter sentences. To enjoy a DVD, he’d have to watch it with the fast-forward button pressed.

    My intention is that the stories would be about all the inventive things the ex-cons might do with this ability, and the difficulties encountered by normal people in attempting to apprehend them.

  13. Andy Says:

    If that’s the case then what would the point be? They may see the world around them moving slower but it’s just their perception of it. The world would in fact be moving at normal speed to anyone that hasn’t had the pleasure of the procedure.
    It just seems that when viewing an individual that has had the procedure performed it would be like watching someone moving around and speaking very fast. That doesn’t work for me.
    I suppose you could come up we some inventive things to happen as you said but it seems a bit thin.

  14. Darryl Sloan Says:

    The point is that the ability provides a massive advantage over any opponent who would come against you.

    However, you may be right. There simply may not be a great variation of stories that you can tell around this premise. I liked the story I wrote ten years ago, and thought there might be room for expansion.

  15. James Maxon Says:

    Oops. I had it backwards. My bad. It was one year that felt like 10, not the other way around.

    I guess I’d have to sync my brain a bit more to see how that would happen between the physical limitations and mental enhancement. Interesting idea, but I think there’s gotta be some really convincing scenarios to pull it off.

  16. Darryl Sloan Says:

    The various comments revealed a lot of problems with the idea (nails in the coffin, so to speak!), so I’m abandoning this one, in terms of an anthology.

    Man, I’m dying to get writing another novel. I have a lot of ideas, but nothing inspiring enough right now.

  17. James Maxon Says:

    I was wondering when you would start working on another novel. I enjoyed reading your first two, so anything else is a sure buy for me.

  18. Andy Says:

    How about that script….Never mind another novel!!!

  19. Darryl Sloan Says:

    Yesss, master!

  20. David Says:

    I might be getting in a wee bit late on this one. I think the prison idea would be hard to hold up. It might be better as, an experimental military research facility doing experiments on cons to perfect the technique for their soldiers. (When the inmate escapes they could destroy the facility and kill all the scientists. This would eliminate any good guys having the same ability)

    I am assuming the following. You could read a book ten times faster, you could do metal arithmetic ten time faster. In general your brain runs ten times faster.
    Does this then mean your body runs ten times slower (in your perception).
    Does this then make it very hard (at least at first) to communicate with people as they are talking ten times slower? (Characters could gradually understand what people are saying when they get use to the speeds.)

    Plots that I think could work.

    One escapee could be a software expert and launch virus attacks on government facilities or use the power to hack bank systems)

    An escapee could scam game shows. 1 minute to answer questions would give him ten. (Once he has learnt to talk and interact at the different speeds.)

    Reaction times for someone flying a plane or driving a racing car could give someone an advantage.

    You could have a scientist doing years worth of research in a matter on months. (Could he release a virus?) (More apocalyptic books!)

    General theme tying these together could be a crack group of government agents or detectives trying to recapture all of these inmates.

    I could be better to have the speedy brain thing as one villain. The researchers could have been messing with all sorts of things and release a whole batch of bad guys with different powers.

    These are just a few thought from the top of my head, don’t know if it will help restart you’re interest in you villain story.

  21. Darryl Sloan Says:

    David,

    You make a good point. Technology like this would never be restricted to prisons when the military potential is so obvious.

    It’s possible I’ll pursue the idea in some form in the future, but an anthology looks unlikely.

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